Friday 7 March 2008

pain in heart

this is something i wrote long back... a short yet true.... so putting it up here again....

wish it wud hav been a heart attack,but no...its pain of suffocation,pain of a feeling that can not be taken in.it feels bad when u u are alone and u want to cry and worse that there's no one to giv u a shoulder to cry.and even worse,when the person u think to be the one to giv u a shoulder to cry n feel at comfort,is the reason for the tears in ur eyes.but this generally happens this way only.i too dont have a answer why so?(if anyone,u r most welcome)

2 comments:

Anfild BC said...

i have also felt the same way long back. but now, he he, ho tears , so i dont require any shoulder :-)

i have put my feelings into the following lines, and after reading this, just let me know what do you think !!!

हर शहर अपनी मौज में मशगूल है, वो कीसी को क्या समझेगा
हर शहर ये सोचता आया है, की आखीर उसे कौन समझेगा

गर तुम समझ पाओ कीसी को , इतना काफी है तेरी जिंदगी के लीये
दो ख़ुशी दे पाओ कीसी को , इतना काफी है तेरी जिंदगी के लीये

आगे बढ़कर देखो इस राह पर, सब तेरे साथ ही चलेंगे
फ़ीर कौन ऐसा कहेगा, की आखीर उसे कौन समझेगा

Aparajita said...

HELLO s1:
thanx or ur reply. wel, m not much good in hindi, stil i cn understand wat u hv in mind 2 say while putting ur feelings in those lines... watevr u wrote is a good thought leading to optimism... i appriciate it. bt only thing i hv to say is that, that life's reality has negetive aspects n v hav 2 accept them. they only make us strong n arouse the optimism in oneself....